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“Hey, Arthur do you have the notes from English?” you asked your collage college.
The thick browed Brit nodded and reefed through his papers, “Yes, here you go.”
You sighed and smiled at the page of precious knowledge, “Thanks you’re a life saver. I can’t believe I slept through the whole thing.”
Arthur nodded, “I’ve noticed you’ve been quite tired lately. Getting enough sleep?”
“Umm,” you blushed, “no…”
“Parties?”
You shook your head.
“Drinking?”
“I wish,” you said. “It’s Al…”
Arthur turned slightly pink, “Ok, I don’t need to know.”
“Hey, ___________!”
“Speak of the Devil,” you murmured. “Hey de-.”
“Hey, what do you think you’re doing pest? Get away from my girl.”
Arthur huffed at Al then said to you, “I’ll see you later ___________.”
“Later, Arthur.”
Once Arthur was gone things started to go downhill. “What do you think you’re doing?”
“Umm, getting English notes,” you said waving the paper. “Why?”
Al put his arm around your shoulders protectively, “I don’t like it when guys try and put the move on you.”
You rolled your eyes, “Arthur is the perfect gentleman.” Then you added under your breath, “Unlike some men I know…”
“What was that?” Al snapped.
“Nothing,” you said your voice going a tad high.
“No,” he said facing you head on, “Tell me.”
You sighed, “Al-.”
Al grabbed your arm, “____________.”
Searching for the right words you found them, “I think…we need…to take a break.” You said.
His face dropped.
“It’s just lately you’ve been crowding me a bit and I think that we need to take a break from each other for a while and then, if we still want to get back together, we will-.”
“What do you mean ‘if’?” Al asked, you could tell this was breaking his heart.
The two of you had been dating ever since junior year in high school. He had transferred in the middle of the second semester and, after about two minutes after meeting you, demanded you go out with him. You loved him a lot, and he loved you. His constant contact and soft touches told you this, but lately…no from the very star he had been overly jealous of every male who had contact with you.
Once you were visiting your cousin and Al completely flipped out because the hug lasted more than five seconds.
You sighed, “Al, our relationship…is interfering with my school work. I love you but-.”
“No,” he snapped, suddenly angry at you, “I get it you need a break from me.” With that he stomped off.
Watching him go you felt your eyes sting a bit. Biting your lower lip you bit back a sob and ran off to your next class.
Later at the cafeteria you sat with some of your friends.
“So where’s Al?” Eliza asked.
“They broke up,” Gilbert said snickering.
You jumped in before the situation got out of hand, “We did not break up. We’re just taking a break.”
Eliza sighed and shook her head sadly, “Hun, telling a boy we’re ‘taking a break’ is like giving them the ok to do whatever they what with whoever they want.”
“Well, if he decides he want’s someone else then we break up and go our separate ways,” you said feeling your heart ache at the thought of Al with another girl.
“Whatever,” Eliza said then jumped slightly as Gilbert reached over to steal some of his girlfriend’s fries. “No! Bad boy!” She snapped as she slapped his hand.
You gave a halfhearted laugh. The previous thought still occupied your mind.
When classes were over you walked home to the apartment you shared with Al. It was going to be awkward, but you knew you could manage. That was until you saw Al with (name you hate). One of those bleach blonde, spray tanned, bimbos that got on your nerves. She was all over him and it made your blood boil.
And the thing was Al was doing nothing to stop her.
You stood there staring until Al noticed you. You turned red and started to walk home again, this time a little more quickly.
“Hey ___________, babe, wait!”
“Don’t you ‘babe’ me,” you snapped and tried to walk faster. IT was in vain as Al grabbed your shoulders and stopped you.
“What’s wrong?”
“Nothing,” you spat out.
“Really?”
You nodded glaring at him, “Yup couldn’t be happier.”
After a few moments of silence Al started to smirk, “You weren’t, by any chance, jealous were you?”
“Me, jealous? You wish.”
Al laughed, “Admit it babe, you want me.”



You growled and grabbed the collar of his shirt. Pulling him down you kissed him fiercely.
Al pulled you closer, his arms circling your waist. You moaned as he bit down on your lip, quite hard, but not hard enough to draw blood. You broke the kiss without allowing him into your mouth.
“Now,” he said arms still around your waist, “I’d say you were really jealous.”
“Yeah,” you said as if it were obvious, “The break it over.” With that you pulled him down for another kiss.
Another 2p!Hetalia.

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:iconbonniegirl832:
BonnieGIRL832 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2015  New Deviant
Him with the bitch Kimberly. * grabs his bat and kills her laughing * MINE
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Kspowell2002 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Student Filmographer
Haha
Good story
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animelovergirl595 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student General Artist
Me at the end of this was literally like: That Break Lasted for about 10 minutes!
Great job, though!
But one thing to the commentors is that 2p! America's name is Allen. Alfred is the 1p! America. Just saying because I literally get pissed from this common mistake. 
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TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Edited Dec 29, 2014  Student Filmographer
Me:Ya know that girl
Al: ya.......*thinking about if I murdered her*
Me:well guess what ........she is .*giggles creepily* not gonna see us again
Al: good girl *pats my head*
Me: *smiles and rubs some of 'her' blood away and thinks in mind why he didn't push that slu* away* hey al
Al: ya?
Me: why didn't you push that slu* away? *slightly irritated*
Al: I wanted to make you jealous......
Me: fu** you
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Chubby333 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Well dang..Calm your tits yes? Sorry, I am just kidding lol..
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TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Filmographer
XD
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Chubby333 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
sorry xD
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Student Filmographer
So what now 😅
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Chubby333 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
uhh
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:iconthefiredragonesreshi:
TheFireDragonesReshi Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student Filmographer
Que the awkward silence
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Chubby333 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*cricket chirping*
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CleverMessenger Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
PRUHUN AWW YEAHHH!!!
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xXOneHellOfAGamerXx Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I Would Have Dismembered That Ugly Bimbo.

What? Jealousy Is One Of My Few Flaws >:3
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Storm-Depomiere Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
aH! hELLO cAPTAIN cAPITAL! wE mEET aT lAST!
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NotSoInnocent12 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me: NO. ALFRED F***ING JONES. YOU KNOW THE RULE.
Alfred: Oh God this again...
Me: IF WE ARE DATING, AND YOU TRY TO TELL ME WHO I CAN AND CANNOT HANG OUT WITH, THEN WE WILL NO LONGER BE DATING. GOOD DAY SIR.
Alfred: But...
Me: I SAID GOOD DAY.
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Bobbypiner Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2014
Clapping Epic clap Clap APPLAUSE CLAP Joker Clap Homura Clapping Icon Dr.Steel claps fo you Clapping pony Slenderman Futaba Clapping Icon Skrillex- Clap emoticon 
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PurpleButterfly26 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
OMG I am laughing so hard at your comment, love it!!!
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KRTimeshifter Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Student Writer
:iconclapplz: PREACH IT!!!
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:iconfaustita:
Faustita Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
it makes me so mad but when he does that it makes me feel all fluffy >////<
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:iconfaustita:
Faustita Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
UGH!!?!?!? THAT BIMBO SHLUT !! O:< 
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hetalialover38 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
"Once you were visiting your cousin and Al completely flipped out because the hug lasted more than five seconds."
That reminded me of Christopher Titus XD
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FireDerpDucky Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015
AHAHA--

Its strange how he flipped out
cause
like,
Thats Reader's cousin and--
you should get it.
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Demonkisses14 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
I would have punched the bimbo
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Ladyolk Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Me to. Unfortunately I would have done it in my mind because im to chicken to actually do it.
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Faustita Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
same -.-
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Demonkisses14 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Yay someone agrees
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Faustita Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
xD
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drey524 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013
In the end it would have been funnier if after the reader saw some girl hanging around Al and ran over to some random dude and started getting slutty around him and Al saw and was like "MOTHERFUCKER!!!".  Lol I would die!
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ImmaBookworm Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Writer
Oh my glob that would be AWESOME!!!!! (More awesome than Prussia.... Who said that!!??? Not me!!!!!) ^_^
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XJumpinJellyBeansX Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
I would change the story around instead of walking home To avoid him i would be running in the verge of tears and turn around and say "HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME!!" Al:-Turns around- see's Crying reader "Oh shit. " "_(Y/N_ this is not what it looks like -Runs after Her-  Reader: Throws stuff at him "LEAVE ME ALONE!!"  Lmao! ^_^ Im Crying Rainbows So Much Plz  The feels!!! I like / Hate it But like it!! I LOVE IT BUT HATE IT A LITTLE!!!! I LOvATE IT !
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Chibichiree Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your rainbow tears hurt my eyes
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XJumpinJellyBeansX Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
Lol xD
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McKosmo99 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
For some reason this makes me think of Friends...

Ross: WE WERE ON A BREAK!!!
Rachel: no one believes you Ross...
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KairiStar728 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
Shortest break I've ever seen.
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Rain109 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know this one girl who got a boyfriend and then within, atleast 30 good seconds, she was all like, "Yeah, I don't like you anymore, so we're through..." and she is one of those snotty popular people so....
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KairiStar728 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013
Pathetic!!!!! Don't those people have any pride?!?!?!
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Lizardhero123 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
Cricket: I've seen shorter (popular people) (five minutes).
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PrussianMist Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Your stories. Are addictive.!
Yet another well written reader insert! Thankyou so much for writing this, faved! x
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Zeldapointdefer Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Me (teasing voice): Al is jealous, Al is jealous!
Al; What did you just say?
Me; Arthur save me!!! Give me some cupcake for Al.
Al: Nooooo not Artie's Cupcake *run away*
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SofiaWerewolf Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
........*facepalm* I am such a weak person.
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Italy-Germany-Japan Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Woah, hello!
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SofiaWerewolf Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconyay2pamericaplz: Dude! Wassup?
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Italy-Germany-Japan Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Ohnmy.
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SofiaWerewolf Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're such a stalker! XD
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Italy-Germany-Japan Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I randomly saw your comment! I swear! I didn't know you'd be here!
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:iconsofiawerewolf:
SofiaWerewolf Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
THIS IS DA 4TH TIME WE BUMPED INTO EACH OZHER!! rawr
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:iconitaly-germany-japan:
Italy-Germany-Japan Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know! And y u no respond to rps?
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
TOTAL AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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link2008 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
I love your 2P! Stories awesome! ^o^ but I guess I understand how he felt but his went overboard!
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