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You smacked Alfred up the head as ‘YOU LOSE’ flashes across your screen. “Jerk!”
“Ha I win!”
“This is co-op mode!”
“Oh…round two?”
You moved your earphones from your head and turned to look at your best friend. “So I heard (name you hate) is going to ask you out. What’s up with that?”
Alfred unplugged himself from his game and chuckled, “Yeah.”
Pulling your knees up to your chest you asked, “What ya gonna say?”
Your best friend shrugged, “Don’t know. She’s kinda a b**ch and not my type.”
Tugging nervously at your baggy sweats you asked, “What is your type?”
“Hmm…damsel in distress,” Alfred said, “cause’ I’m the hero!” Jumping out of his chair he hit his head on your low ceiling. “Dude…”
Looking down at your cloths you felt your heart drop; you were defiantly not his type. You liked to play video games and play sports. You didn’t dress up; in fact sometimes people sometimes mistook you for a guy because of the way you dressed.
Maybe it was time for a change.

Time skip…

“Eliza, are you sure this is necessary?” you asked as your friend applied makeup.
“I thought the same thing, hon,” said Elizabeta, “but it’s so worth it. Roderich told me I was pretty!”
You groaned as she put some blush on your cheeks. “You sure this will get Alfred to notice me?”
“For sure!” Feliks called from his closet, “Oh this will so fit you!” He ran out with a pink strapless knee length dress. “What do you think?”
You blanched.
“She loves it!” Feliks cheered.

Time skip again…

“Like, get out of the car, ___________,” Feliks demanded.
“Pol, is that __________ in the car? Alfred has been looking for her,” said Toris.
Feliks sighed, “Yeah, but I, like, can’t get her to get out of the car.”
Toris sighed, “You know ___________ it’s only a matter of time before Alfred finds you. He said something about a new spot on the football team…”
The door of the car opened quickly, “Really? Is he gonna try out?”
“__________!”
You turned to see the object of your affections running to you. ‘Crap…’ you thought.
His expression changed from overly excited, to shocked. “Dude…when did you become a chick?”
“Heh heh,” you chuckled nervously. “What do you think?”
Alfred scratched his neck edgily, “I kinda liked you the way you were before…”
Your expression fell, “Oh…WELL MAKE UP YOUR MIND ALREADY!” You snapped and ran off to the girl’s bathroom.
“Dude…what’s wrong with her?”
Feliks huffed, “She, like, totes has a crush on you. That’s why she, like, got all dressed up and stuff.”

To the bathroom…

‘This isn’t me,’ you thought angrily as you looked at yourself in the mirror. Angrily you wiped away any reminisce of the makeup from your face. The heels that had been making your feet ache came off next. In your backpack you dug out your sweatshirt and a pair of jeans.
Without any grace you picked the bobby pins out of your hair and ran your fingers through it.
‘This is me,’ you thought smiling when you saw yourself in the mirror. ‘I shouldn’t have to change to get Alfred’s attention.’
With that you left the bathroom with your head held high.
A few girls who had seen you come in in a dress stared at you.
“What happened?” Eliza asked.
You shrugged, “Just wasn’t me.”
“____________.”
“Al.”
“Wanna watch me try out for football later?” he said with that make-your-heart-melt smile of his.
“Sure,” you said.
He put his arm around your shoulders and shouted, “Alright my girl is back!”
Your cheeks reddened slightly as he called you ‘his girl’.
He kissed your temple, “You know I like you the way you are right, ___________?”
“R-really?”
Alfred nodded, “Want to go out for a burger after tryouts?”
“I’d like that.”
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” a despaired voice called from behind you. You turned to see Feliks kneeling on the floor with his arms stretched dramatically to you, “My master piece is ruined!”
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:iconfnafisawsome1987:
fnafisawsome1987 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
MAKEUP IS NOT A FUCKING MASTEROIECE ITS FUCKING TRASH!!
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NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Student Filmographer
Omfg my friends do the exact thing xD I DONT WANNA CHANGE...T^T

Lel sorry feliks :3
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VinylSushi Featured By Owner May 12, 2015
DAT ending tho XD
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jeffarnette Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
 You turned to see Feliks kneeling on the floor with his arms stretched dramatically to you, “My master piece is ruined!”

this is my friends when I spend the night at their house and I'm treated like a limited edition Barbie and given a makeover, but then they see me two days later (after a lot of showers to get that crap off). no hair spray, no fancy shoes, no make up no problem in my book
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Awesomesauce1274 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Lol sorry Poland.
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lilkirby8899 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
People tell me to act more '' feminine and act a girl should.'' But I'm Unique the way i am! Tomboy for ever! X3 And i can't change, because i like being me and it defines who I really am C:
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thedemidod Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
My friends are constantly trying to doll me up especially when I have a crush so I can relate XD
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:iconlucijohn:
Lucijohn Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Bitches be like
Maeve be more like a girl!
And I be like
I am no fucking girl
I'M A MAEVE
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ILuvAnimeSK Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Everyone always asks me if I'm a girl or a boy, (girl) so I could totally relate to this!
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AnimePanther921 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Student Writer
Feliks, GURLLLLL YOU KNOW I'M LIKE TOO FABULOUSLY AWESOME FOR GIRLY SHIT!
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LunaGamerImInPortal Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Student General Artist
XD DONT WORRY FELIX IM STILL FAB!!!!!!!!!! XD
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:iconray711:
Ray711 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I absolutely despise dresses and stuff like that... Sorry, Feliks! I mean, I love you Like you and all, but no dress.
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princess-snow-wolf Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014
ah poor Feliks. I'd wear a dress if it made him happy. (not a strapless one though, I learned my lesson with those.)
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basketballqueen12 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014
the tomboy is sooooo me and I love America best one I have read yet
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:iconlove-bug-2:
Love-bug-2 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
That last part was just…yes just yes.
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:iconnyanmeowth:
nyanmeowth Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Artist
Sorry Pol!!! *quick hug*
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Sarcasticme101 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh poor Feliks 
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KawaiiMasterXx Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student
HOLYFUCKINGDINONUGGETS FELIKS AT THE END DOEXD
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fairy-princesssstar Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
XDD omg that so me dude!! XD epic story! 
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109144 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Erm, excuse me, I'll be a sec.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dude, like, I seriously like, got dressed up for like, nothing.

 

Poland moment.xD Awesome stories though!

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Fullmetalmarti Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD I'm a real tomboy and I play video games hate dresses and when people meet me they always think I'm a guy they rarly think I'm a girl
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lettheworldbreath Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
GAH ZAT WAS AWESOME!!! (Out of all da characters in this fiction Feliks is my FAYVOO-RIITTTE~~~!!! (the word favorite lengthened to be all fabulous and such just like Feliks)
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Allie10930 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
Every time I see the name feliks my mind always goes to thinking 'pewdiepie?'
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:iconlovesickanimefreak:
LoveSickAnimeFreak Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
OMFG YESS 
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Allie10930 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Lol :iconpewdiepiebrofistplz:
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:iconlovesickanimefreak:
LoveSickAnimeFreak Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014
XDDD Hi bro 
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MariHadALittleLambo Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Feliks... all that work for naught!
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glaceon-master-18 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh this is just amazingsauce!!
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Pineapplebombgirl Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh Feliks XD you should be in the modeling business;)
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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
It's not called being gay.

...

It's called being FABULOUS!!!
                                             -PewDiePie
Fits Poland completely.  
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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
I'm a hardcore tomboy, so when I saw this I was like, "HWEEEEEEEUH HELL YEAH!!!"  XD
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LunaKittyArtist99 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Artist
Feliks: My master piece is ruined!
Me: good God, get over me already! I'm with Alfred!
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Animelover20014 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Student
Feliks " My master piece is ruined!":squee: 
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:iconqtsosweet:
QTsoSweet Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Godammit Feliks get over me already! I know I'm kickbutt "sexy" and everything but I don't like you that way!! ):<
                                                                                   :iconfabulousplz:XD
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creek17 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Ohh, pook Pol.... loved it~♡♥♡♥☆★☆★
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:iconotakuwithakeyblade:
OtakuWithAKeyblade Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
"My master peice is ruined!!!!!"
XDDDD
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:iconrein2003:
Rein2003 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IKR
Romania: Yeah, yeah. Sadistic bastard.
Me: WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?
Romania: *gulps* N-nothing.
Me: Good.
Poland: Y DID U DO DAT? AFTAH ALL WE'VE BEEN 2GETHA.
Me: Dude. We're not talking on Random Anime Chat Site now. So, DON'T USE SHORTCUTS. Understand?
Poland: I like totes fabulously understand.
Romania: You not gulping?
Poland: Broski, u shouldn't be afraid of a gurl dat thinks of a 5 year-old cousin as her lil broski. She can't harm you, since she's emotional. But she like totes un-fabulously knows how to harm you with WORDS.
Me: My, my. Such a TOUCHING little chat. DIE, PEASANTS. *takes out pocket knife* You shall face the consequences.
Romania: SEE I TOLD YOU SHE'S SCARY!
Me: AND NO SHORTCUTS, POLAND!
Poland: Broski, that's like totes un-cool.
Me: I DON'T CARE. DIE.
Romania: *closes eyes and wishes it's a nightmare*
Poland: *closes eyes and wishes he could be home and see his BEAUTIFUL house again*
Me: BWAHAHAHAHAHA! DUDES. I THOUGHT YOU KNEW MY SO CALLED 'POCKET KNIFE' IS A PLUSH KNIFE! BWAHAHAHAHAHA IT WAS AWESOME TO SEE YOUR SCARED FACE RO!
Poland: SEE I LIKE TOTES TOLD YOU SHE CAN'T HARM YOU. LIKE, TOTES TOLD YOU.
Me: That moment was the. Awesomest. Moment. Of. My. Entire. Life XD.
Romania: *like, totes KO-ed*
Me and Poland: *like totes laughing like maniacs and junk*

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OtakuWithAKeyblade Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
wtf did i just read,.....
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:iconrein2003:
Rein2003 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: You just read how insane I am.
Friend: Not joking.
Me: OMG HOW THE F*CK DID YOU GET HERE?! YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW ENGLISH!
Friend: Dude!!!!! It's me! FASHION!
Me: Lorena...you could be BFF's with Poland.
Lorena: YOU ALWAYS RUIN MY MASTERPIECES!
Me: YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW TO PAINT FACES WITH LIPSTICK!!!!!!!!!!!
Lorena: THAT'S NOT FASHIONABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: OMG WHY ARE WE YELLING????????
Lorena: IDK!!!!!!!!!!
Poland: Rein, you are, like, totes insane. Broski-
Lorena: I'M A GIRL, POLSKA!!!!!!!!
Poland: CHILL. Dziewczyna, I don't understand how you and this insane dziewczyna get along.
Lorena: ?
Poland: Dziewczyna = girl
Lorena: ...Such a long word.
Me: IKR, in our country fată means girl.
France: OML!!!!!
Me: OH MY LOVE!!!!!!!!!
Me: ...That's just awkward. Next you will say OMET which means OH MY EIFFEL TOWER!
France: Hmm...That's a pretty good idea...
Me: WTH that's creepy.
England: OMS!!!!!!!!
Lorena: ...OH MY SCONES? *hopeful look in eyes*
England: YES!!!!!!
Me: ...Again, that is awkward.
America: OMVG
Me: OH MY VIDEO GAMES AND THAT'S IT!
Poland and Lorena: OMLTFFS!
Me: ...WTF?
Poland: It means OH MY, LIKE, TOTES FABULOUS FASHION SENSE!
Me: ...*runs for life*
Poland: And I, like, totes love this broski called Pewdiepie. IT'S NOT GAY, IT'S, LIKE, TOTES FABULOUS!
Me: *shouts* HE DIDN'T SAY LIKE AND TOTES!
Poland: *shouts back* WHATEVER!!!!
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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Student Writer
I'M NOT THE ONLY SADISTIC CRAZY PERSON HERE!!! *proceeds to laugh likehowtheyanderesintheanimesdoit* 
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Rein2003 Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: LOL BROFIST
America: YEEHOO!!!!!!!
Me: Yeah. LOL. Yeah.
Friend: Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude where the fahck is the lamp >_<
Me: YOU ALREADY LOST IT?????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I PAYED 6 FAHCKING DOLLARS ON IT FOR YA! WHEN I COULD HAD GOT SNICKERS! DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Friend: NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW HELL TO THE NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
Me: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH HEAVEN TO THE YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
Friend: WAT THE FAHCK WAS DAT
Me: DOESN'T COUNT. INTERNET LANGUAGE START!
Friend: DUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE MY BRAH GOT SOOOOOOOOO DRUNK LAST NIGHT
Me: RLY BRAH
Friend: RLY
Me: MASS-MEDIA
Friend: LOL WUT
Me: POM GETS WI-FI
Friend: HUS/SHIBE
Me: CREST/PUDDLE
Friend: WUT DID U JUST SAY TO ME U LITTLE BITCH ASS SHIT
Me: LOL WUT
Friend: UR FAHCKING DED KIDDO
Me: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL
Friend: WAYT
Me: WUT
Friend: WHERE THE FAHCK IS THE LAMP
Me: DIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Friend: SNICKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEERS XD
America: YEEHOO!
Me: ...
Friend: AWKWARD AMERICA X LAMP MOMENT
Me: LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

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VOCALOIDHakuYowane Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Student Writer
XDDDDD I'M LAUGHING SO HARD RIGHT NOW. And I love, love LOVE Your BadEndNight avatar. MY FAVE SONG :D
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Rein2003 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: THANK U NORMAL KIDDO! AT LEAST YOU DON'T LOSE LAMPS! UNLIKE THIS MUTHATRUCKAH!
Friend: HEY!
Me: 6 DOLLARS
Friend: NAW
Me: GIVE ME SNICKERS
Friend: NAW
Me: UR SMART
Friend: NAW
Me: UR BOOTIFUL
Friend: NAW I'M NOT BOOTIFUL I'M BEAUTIFUL
Me: But not smart XD
Friend: YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!
Me: lol jk jk
Friend: PHEW!
Me: coughcoughnotcoughcough
Friend: UR DED KIDDO
Me: YEAH YEAH
Friend: YIHA
Me: lol wut happenin
Friend: ...CAPS LOCK
Me: pUNCH ME IN DA 
Friend: WUT
Me: it's a figure of speech
Friend2: HIYA
Me: HI FRIEND2 I'M ME AND THIS SHITTY ASS EXCUSE FOR A MANSERVANT IS SEBASTIAN
Friend: I'M FRIEND AND NOT A MANSERVANT AND A GIRL >_<
Me: problem seby
Friend: YEAH
Friend2: WUT HAPPENIN
Friend3: Learn proper language bastards
Me: forgot the dot
Friend3: ...
Me: pwned u
Friend3: ...Still learn proper language
Me: put the damn dot already
Friend3: ...
Me: i'm starvin. cook.
Friend3: WRITE WITH BIG FUCKING LETTERS AFTER A SENTENCE AND IT'S 'STARVING' NOT 'STARVIN'
Me: u know, u write rly bad
Friend3: ...
Me: learn proper langu9ahdwaskl bastard
Friend: FRIEND3 SWORE! FRIEND3 JUST SWORE! AND Y DO WE HAVE IDIOT NAMES ME
Me: lol i'm special friend
Friend2: Y DO I AND FRIEND3 HAVE NUMBERS
Me: lol i didn't have any other names 4 u
Friend3: STOP WITH THESE SHORTCUTS
Me: fuk da popo
Friends: ...
Me: not tellin me wat to do
Friends: ...
Me: ask friend4 if it wants to join our gang activies
Friend3: Like what
Me: ask it
Friend: FRIEND4
Friend4: WUT
Friend: COME
Frien4: y
Friend: ME SAID
Friend4: ok comin
AFTER 112 YEARS
Me and friends: *waiting for Friend4*
BACK TO OUR TIME
Friend4: ok im here
Me: bad grammar friend4
Friend4: lol wut
Me: i expected more
Friend4: yah yah me get to the point
Me: gang activies now
Friend4: so
Me: we need to bury a corpse
Me: *after a long pause* dat corpse is gonna be u
Friend4: naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw *runs away*
Friend2: WAT WAS THE POINT
Me: *writing* talking is too mainstream
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OtakuWithAKeyblade Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
XD
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Rein2003 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: XD I love that smiley!
Russia: I can't wait to crush our ribs, da.
Me: Russia,  say that to the guys in my class. It had a special effect on the third fattest and many people laughed at it.
Russia: Ok *goes*
Me: 0.0 I didn't know I had such big eyes...And I didn't know he would go to my class. Watch Andreea scream like a little girl XD!
Andreea: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
Me: Told ya! Give me my thousand bucks!
Invisible Man: FINE!!!!
Me: Ohohoho! I'm rich!
Andreea: YES! POPE IS DEAD!
Me: Pope is dead? XD
Andreea:  Russia didn't kill him tough...
Me: Ooooooh, mystery ahead, eh? WELL, DETECTIVE REIN'S FIRST CASE!
Next comment: Investigating Pope(It's his last name) death in order for him to find his punishment.
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creek17 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013
Holy...... Roman Empire...
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:iconrein2003:
Rein2003 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me: Awesome Holy Sh*t reference!
RANDOM ANIME CHAT SITE
MESSAGE FROM VODKA_KOL
SUBJECT: O.O
MESSAGE: YOU DISTURBED ME WITH THAT PICK 12 CHARACTERS MEME. I WILL NEVER FALL IN LOVE WITH PRUSSIA OR RUN AWAY WITH NORWAY. I AM VERY DISTURBED. AND I WILL CRUSH YOUR RIBS, DA.
                                                                                                                        -GO TO SLEEP (JEFFEH WEFFEH)
Me: ...RUSSIA IS A JEFF THE KILLER FANGIRL!
Jeff the Killer: O.O *runs away for life* JUST KIDDING! *gets knife ready to kill Russia*
Me: O.o That's quite disturbing... IMMA EAT POPCORN! *gets popcorn
Jeff the Killer: DIE FANGIRL! Wait...you're a GUY?! O.o YOU'RE GAY!!!!!!!!!! *runs away for life* JUST KIDDING! *gets knife ready to kill Russia* DIE GAY COUNTRY!!!!!!!!
Russia: Wasn't that obvious, da?
THEY HAVE A FIGHT OF LIFE AND DEATH
IT'S A TIE O.o
Jeff the Killer: That...was cool.
Russia: IKR
Me: Russia...befriends a dead serial killer and thinks it's nothing...

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MiaRoseLove Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Is it just me or is the last line of almost all fanfics' last line hilarious. Great story!
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Pokepal5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” a despaired voice called from behind you. You turned to see Feliks kneeling on the floor with his arms stretched dramatically to you, “My master piece is ruined!”

....
Now remember, its not gay, its FABULOUSSSS~!
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kittystar101 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

pewdiepie refrence

nice

:pewdiebrofistplz:

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