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"Come on _________, just this one party," your friend Eliza begged. For weeks she had been trying to get you out of your basement and to one of the many parties that were being thrown for the last few months of the school year.
You looked up from your math homework, "For the last time no. However, if you want to go and get wasted be my guest."
"But ____________~ anybody who's anybody is going to be there!" she whined. "Please, please, please, please, plllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaase!"
"Eliza, no!"
"But Roderich is going to be there!" she whined. Her elaborate plan was to confess to him and if he didn't accept she could say she was drunk off her butt. "If I don't have a wingwoman I'm doomed!"
"Seriously…wingwoman?" you asked. "Why don't you ask…I don't know anybody but me!"
Eliza scowled, "I won't force you to wear a dress."
You glared at her.
"Or drink."
Glare.
"Ok, ok, I won't force you to dance either."
"Fine," you spat.
Eliza's face lit up, "Thank you, thank you, thank you! The party is tonight at Antonio's place."
Wait. Antonio? As in Antonio Carriedo? Not only was he super popular, he was a member of the school's Bad Touch Trio. The biggest perverts in the school. "Wait Eli-." It was too late she had already run off.  Not only were they the biggest perverts in school, they were also seemed to take a special interest in you. Going out of their way to molest and tease you.  
Something deep in your gut told you that you were screwed.

~Time Skip~

The music was deafening. The smoke of cigarettes was thick. And smell of beer was strong. This was a high school party. This also made you gag.
"Hey baby," shouted an all too familiar voice, Gilbert. You winced.
"Gil."
"Dance with me!" he grabbed your arm and attempted to drag you onto the dance floor.
Luckily for you he was completely wasted. "No," you said flatly.
Gilbert continued to try and drag you to dance.
"Ohonhonhon~," great another annoyance, "I think the young lady wants to dance with moi." The Frenchman draped his arm around your shoulder.
You glared at him. "No."
It was obvious that they were both drunk.
"Don't want to dance, maybe we can do something else~…"
You looked around and found Toni not too far behind, "Toni! I think your friends need a nap."
He ended up helping you get Francis and Gilbert to a guest room.
"Thanks __________, they would have probably ended up hurting themselves," said Toni.
Turning to face him you said, "No proble-." With that his lips were on yours.
The shock soon melted away to leave passion as he licked your bottom lip asking entrance which you granted.
"Kensesesese~," an arm from behind grabbed you and pulled you onto the bed, Toni got pulled with you.
"May we join?"
You turned red at the position you and the Spaniard were in and Francis's lewd insinuation. "T-Toni, could you please get o-." Toni leaned down and gave you another kiss.
"You're really something special, aren't you _____________," Toni said smiling down at you.

~Another time skip~

The bright light gave you a headache as you opened your eyes. You were still clothed, but the three members of the Bad Touch Trio were draped over you.
Antonio holding you in his arms.
Francis with his arms around your waist and his head resting on your belly.
And then Gilbert who was sprawled across your legs.
"Te amo ___________," Toni whispered into your ear holding you tighter.
A slight moan came from the Frenchman on your stomach, "Hmmm, je t'aime ___________."
"Eliza," moaned Gilbert, "Get away from _________. ________,  ich liebe dich."
So three complete perverts were in love you. Stranger things have happened.
I haven't written anything for a while so I wrote this in some spare time I had. I've been working on a story and have been trying to find out what to do with it. I'm not sure if I should try and get it published or if I should post it here.

Comment! Tell me what you think!

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:iconwhybot221:
Whybot221 Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
HELL YES 3 INCREDIBLY SEXY GUYS ALL OVER ME!!!!
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:iconmelissasmith11:
melissasmith11 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
I was reading this and listening to I want your bite nightcore version and I read the part where it said you were covered by the three members of the BTT at the time when the song said _who needs clothes when you are covered in men_
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DarkAngelLala Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014
all I could say was 'YES IM STILL WEARING CLOTHES!!!'
no joke the story is good
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melissasmith11 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
When I read it I thought really that took an unexpected turn
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Celestmorning Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
I love that picture! I kind of have a thing for boys wearing glasses....
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IhavetoomanyOCs123 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student General Artist
My Singapore self: W-Wó ài nî...nî báichī.
My Atlantic City self: I-Ich liebe dich...ihr Idioten (Even though Preußen is mein bruder...o.o)
My Wales self: F-Fi'n caru ti...chi idiots...
((In each language: I love you, you idiots))
((Chinese, German, Welsh))
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JadetheKidR9 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014   General Artist
-shrugs- Feh. Ti Amo, you idiotas.... 
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TerraAreli Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
whoa whoa....eliza? ELI WHAT??!
Gil now i'm really curiosu as to why you said that o^o)
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hetaliafan90 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
this is one of those things that makes me wish i had the power to read something in the second person (yes this is the 2nd pov) and it will come true......
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XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YUP
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InsaneObsession Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
*sighs*
Me: Alright, boys. I would gladly be with all of you.
BTT: REALLY? :heart:
Me: But, I don't think Ivan would be happy with that. *points*
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Sweetiepie14 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What would that look like in a picture...... 0_0 oh my god...Kawaii!!
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NekoNyaaNikki Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconifaintplz: Lol Gilbert is Sprawled!
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
d'aw I wouldn't mind waking up like that ^^
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NixyClizzy Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
OMG. The pic. Where did you get it from?? :nuu:
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I found it on Google.
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Shuru10 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
I LOLed at Gilbert! "Sprawled" XD!!
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:iconkaitobunny88:
kaitobunny88 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nya~ BTT!!! I love these guys XD
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RAE8892 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
O_O Oh . . . My . . . GOODNESS!
-dies-
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soulxmaka3000 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012
I'm in love with this story...Please write part 2 when you have time!!
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I just wrote part 2. :) hope you like...
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OddDisease Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconblushplz:
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KawaiiItaly Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Part twwo~? Pleaaase~? :DD I loved this so much, no flipping words to describe it XD
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps. I might get insipired later, right now I'm working on an original story so I want to get the next chapter done and send it to my beta.
Thank you by the way. Its always nice to hear that my work is appreciated. I love getting feedback.
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KawaiiItaly Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, no problem! I absolutely loved it~! ^^
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, I love it.
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!:)
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AskMontreal Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh how fun XD
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^^
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kimmie456 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I loved this, great job~!
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
glad you enjoyed it :)
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flotus-17 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Artist
this is awesome!!!!
are you gonna make a part 2?
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I don't know. It could go either way.
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:iconfrecklelemonade:
FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh, I really liked this! Great work!~
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :D
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:iconfrecklelemonade:
FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcomes!~ <3
Are you going to continue it?
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
maybe
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:iconfrecklelemonade:
FreckleLemonade Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay ^^
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CuboneGirl21 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaaawwwww!!!!! >////////< is there more????
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not sure...there might be. But then again I might not get inspired to. It could go either way.
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CuboneGirl21 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok...*sad face*
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh gosh! XD I can never imagine myself in that situation!

Awesome job! It was adorable!
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...I hope I never get in that situation myself, but its kinda fun to fantasize. :)
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
True~ I mean really if this were to really happen Id wake up with my phone filled with worry and angry messages from my mom XD
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Esyutomanyam Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
wow
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chick17 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG! I ove this ~
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CardinalDesertFox Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
Well, my reaction involved cooing and then laughing like a mad woman. I hope you are pleased. XD
:iconpervyprussiaplz: :iconprussiarollplz:
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you liked it. I am pleased ^^
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