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"Ring around the rosie, a pocket full of posies, ashes ashes, we all fall down," you sang as you strung daisies into a crown.
"Bonjour," a voice from behind you said. It had a French flare that was noticeable, but unfamiliar to you. The boy, Francis, turned red. You were so pretty. Long (h/c) hair and wide (e/c) eyes. You were by far the prettiest girl he had ever seen. "W-what is your name?"
You got up and walked over to him, "I'm __________. Do you want to play with me?" He nodded and you smiled pulling him to the flower field to the two daisy crowns you had made, "Here, one for you and one for me."
He watched as you set the floral crown on his head.
"There now you are the prince, and I'm the princess," you said.
Francis blushed, "Th-then can I give you a kiss?"
"Kiss?" you asked cocking your head. "Ok, I suppose." You leaned forward and gave him a quick peck on the cheek. "Now let's play."
As a young country France never had so much fun before in his life. He would chase you and when he caught you, you would give him a kiss. After hours of play he had to go back to his work.
"I have to leave now," he said sadly.
"Now? Can't we play a little longer?"
He shook his head sadly, "I have to work."
"Maybe tomorrow?"
"Maybe…"
You held out your pinky to him, "Pinky promise?"
He wrapped his tiny pinky around your equally small one, "Promise."
You came back to that field day after day, Francis never came back. But you never stopped waiting for him, and each visit you would make flower crowns for the two of you so he could be your prince and again and you his princess.
Years later you still came. You were sixteen now and ready for marriage.
"Will I ever see you again," you mumbled weaving together more flowers.
"Oui," that French accented voice from behind said.
You turned to see an all grown up Francis. Huffing you turned around, confusing him, "You jerk, you never came back."
He gave a laugh and sat down next to you, "I tried, but I-."
"I came here every day!"
"__________ I-."
"And now you're here trying to-."
"______________!" he shouted. "I want to make up for it."
"Well I don't think you can," you said sniffing.
He pulled out a small black box, "Would eternity do it?"
Tears came to your eyes, "E-eternity?"
"The rest of our lives, together," he smiled, "Oui."
"Oui," you whispered kissing him on the lips.
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tea-and-tai Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Student General Artist
You are an awesome writer love.
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CheshireRose247 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Just curious was this based on love song by Taylor swift?
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nope.
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww~ how cute!!!
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AnnaThePolarBear Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Wait, so let me get this straight...
I meet a boy who becomes my friend before he leaves and then I wait ten or something years to see him again, and when I finally see him again I promise to marry him without fully knowing him..?
Sounds good with me XD
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Cheeseburgerfantic Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
OMG CUTENESS GAVE ME A HEART ATTACK *dies*
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AlucardFTW5 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student General Artist
aw! ^^ i feel fwuffy
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AnnaTheWonderGirl01 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute! :aww:

France is not one of my favorites, but this made me see him in a different light! Great job! :clap:
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sakurita123cami Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Student
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :heart:
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XxSoulEater078xX Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i loved it X3
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SorrowWidow Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Awwww :heart:
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VanillaSuu Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!!!I love your way of describing France.He is not bad,just misunderstood.
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vienna-kangaroo Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was absolutely beautiful. <3 I love your characterisation of France~
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cheesewizmeow Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
omy god i hate france but this made me like him a little. *holds up fingers to emphasize how little*
:iconfranceplz: oh you know you love me
:iconcheesewizmeow: NO I love denny and gilly *holding denmark and prussia to cheast
:iconfrancesulkplz: why does everyone hate me?

point of it is great story~y
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^^
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cheesewizmeow Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe no prob ^^
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Shuru10 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Aww! Chibi France seems so cute!! >U<
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Omg!!!! Thank you!!!!! You're a totally sweetheart!
Never stop writing ur awesome! ;)
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
don't worry, I don't plan to stop writing anytime soon.
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You did an awesome job! No lie!
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monkchoo24 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Still a master of ur work
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes: thank you ^^
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monkchoo24 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
np
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cute! :iconfavbomb-plz:
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