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He was annoying. He was arrogant. He was selfish. He was insensitive. He was loud. He was crude. He was self-centered. You stared at the Dane from across the table.
World meetings were hard enough without the added drama. You made it very clear to everyone that you found people like Denmark unacceptable. Writing on your paper you accidently snapped your pencil in half with the force you applied on it.
Everyone in the room turned to look at you as you calmly pulled out another pencil.
“Proceed,” you said in a monotone.
“Wow __________, what’s eating you?” Denmark called out.
You glared at him, but said nothing.
“Is something wrong ___________?” Germany asked.
Silently you shook your head as the answer.
The meeting continued without much trouble. Once the meeting was over you slowly started to gather your things together.
“Hey __________!”
‘Great, another annoying being,’ you thought as Prussia walked up to you.
“France and Spain and I were going to go drinking, want to come?”
You shook your head and started to leave.
“Come on ___________, live a little,” Spain said blocking your way.
“Spain, move or I will move you,” you threatened.
Francis put his hand on your shoulder, “Come on ___________, have some fun with us.”
“Your and my definition of fun is very different,” you snarled.
“___________!” someone called. You peeked behind Spain to see Denmark walking over. He pushed Spain out of the way and pulled you away, “Come on let’s go!”
Once the two of you were out of earshot you snapped your arm out of his grasp, “What was that for?”
“They were annoying you right?”
You nodded.
“Well…” he trailed of and after a few seconds he said, “I played hero.” With that he walked off.
Leaving you there in the hall blushing at what he just said. Maybe Denmark wasn’t such a bad guy after all…
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Picture isn't mine, found it online.
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CanadianBeauty404 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
It was a great portrayal of one getting to realize there is more to a person that they let on. It does seem that people enjoy putting up a barrier and a facade to either make themselves feel better or put others down. I am truly a fan of your works and don't let anyone get to you, because chances are they might know the rules but they don't play by them, expecting others to do so. Also, they probably can't write so they criticize others works instead of critic politely. Love you dear and may there not be a tear shed over such insignificant replies, for you are worth so much more praise.
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Lullabydream Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved it it was short and cute at the same time so much fluff>w<
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ahavat234 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great story! I really loved it! Don't let out people's comments get you down - whoever that was probably was trying to help, but did it in the most inappropriate way possible. I love stories like this! Please please please continue it, okay? :D
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Finnish-Monomania Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
Wow! Great story! Luv it!
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TenshiNoAkasuna Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
Little fluffy~~~~
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Awwww! Just don't become America!
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AtlantisReturns Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
this is adorable!
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hetalialover345 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Denny =w= mhm yes
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glaceon007 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013  Student General Artist
This is cute~
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fatefalters Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
Hm, stumbled upon this on the front page.
First of all, congratulations for being the author of yet another mediocre reader-insert on the front page.
I spotted a problem right off the bat, you use a picture you have no rights to, with no indication to the original artist. No, "found it online" doesn't suffice.
That doesn't really have anything to do with your story.
The first bit, he he he he, is awkward. It would be he was blank and blank. He was bla and bla and worst of all "the most..." or another he, anyway...
You use "you said" a lot, it get's repetitive, try "you remained silent", "chirped" "murmured" "drawled" ect
You might want at the end "he walked off, leaving you there..."
Tip, get an editor.
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