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"____________, love, you must eat," Arthur said placing a plate full of strange food in front of you. You were on the only bed in the small house.
You shook your head slowly. Right now you were far too weak to argue verbally. Even though you resigned yourself to this fate you still clung to the hope that he might let you go. However the chances of that were slim to none.
"____________, ______________, please," the fairy man held your hand in both of his, "eat something. Talk to me, I don't care if you do nothing but insult me."
Your eyelids felt heavy as you began to drift off.
Strong hands shook you back into consciousness, "___________, love don't go to sleep. I'm afraid you won't wake up again."
You opened your mouth to speak, but then closed it.
Arthur leaned forward to kiss you, you let him. But you didn't respond, you didn't move. His gentle kisses then turned hungry and angry. "Kiss me back dammit," he breathed.
You did nothing; it was as if you didn't even know he was there.
Fervently he trailed kisses down your neck to your shoulder where the strange marking was. "Anything." He muttered, "I'll give you whatever you want, you just have to ask."
"Anything?"
His head snapped up to look at you. He smiled and caressed your pale cheek lovingly, "Yes ___________. If you ask for the moon I'll bring it to you. If you ask for riches I'll give you the world, just ask."
"You promise?"
"Yes," he nodded pulling your face closer to his. "A fairy never breaks a promise.
"I…I want…"
"What, what do you want, love?"
You sighed and took a deep breath, "I want to go home."
There was silence. Tears came to his eyes, "No…this can't be what you want." He grabbed you and pulled you to his chest. "Please, ____________. Don't tell me you want that!"
"But I do," you breathed. "You've kept me here against my will Arthur." Arthur shook in pleasure when you said his name.
"____________," Arthur whispered, "I'll give you what you want." He broke away from you, "Just one thing you must do for me."
"What?"
He leaned close to your face, "Give me three days to make you fall for me."
"F-fall for you."
"If you don't love me by the time the three days is over I'll let you go and never bother you again." You smiled, your eyes brightening. "But if you love me you'll not only stay with me, but you'll marry me."
Your eyes widened, "M-Marry you?"
He nodded and kissed your forehead, "I love you ____________. I'll do everything in my power to make you love me."

~Time Skip; brought to you by France:
Banshee-Scream: France would you like to say a few words? France? Fra-AHHHHHHH! DON'T TOUCH ME THERE!!!
France: Ohonhonhon~  
Three days later………~

The two of you were sitting on a hill watching the sunset. The past three days had been perfect. Something about Arthur made you happy.
Moving closer to Arthur for warmth, "_-__________?"
"I'm cold," you murmured.
Arthur smiled, "___________, have I ever told you I loved you?"
You giggled, "Yes, several times."
"I just want you to know before you-."
"Arthur, what does this mark mean," you said interrupting, "I know you said it means I'm yours. But what does that mean."
The fairy man sighed, "It means your perfect for me. I can never love or be with anyone else." He traced the design. You silently cursed yourself for allowing Arthur to put you in fairy made clothes. The dress was strapless and displayed the mark on your shoulder.
"Arthur…"
"What is it," he said burying his face in your (h/c) hair.
"I-I think I love you," you said pulling away so you could see his face.
There was unmistakable joy there, "Really?"
You nodded, "Yes."
"Then you'll be mine." He took your hand in his.
"And you'll be mine," you said kissing him.
And from then on she was his. And he………was hers.
All done, hope you guys like it.
Tell me what you think in the comments bellow.

Note this is a SEQUEL part 1 is here [link]
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:iconxxartimisxx:
xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student General Artist
AAAAWWWWWWWWWW~!!!!!!!!!!!
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YuRiMiKkI Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Artist
Haha, Reading this while listening to La Corda d'Oro - Primo Passo, The music fit the atmosphere of the story perfectly. XD
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student General Artist
I can't stop reading this!
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SigurSaeglopur Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
:iconermahgerdplz: ermahgerd that story was so cute! :iconfrenchsquealplz: Great job! I love the fairy idea :D
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^^ I just love fairies, at least the kind I depict.
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SigurSaeglopur Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
I love most mythical things especially ones coming from Grecko Roman myth :D
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Me too :)
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TomatoLoverVargas Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Aww, this was so cute~ I loved it. And I have the preview picture as my wallpaper right now XD
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sukibelle Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
where is the picture from? ^^
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I found it on google, just type in "england hetalia magic".
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Chibime87 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
The dialog was really good in hear !! I like how Arthur fought for what he wanted yet was gentle. I would have liked to see what happened with in the other two days . Other then that. I thought you ended this really well !! The romance was sweet ,spicy !! You could really tell how you wrote Arthur. That he really wanted to give everything to the reader and not force her at the same time !!
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I'm writing another part that's about the three day gap (it might be a while though)
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Chibime87 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
That is alright !!! Take your time !!! You really put allot of thought in this story I can tell !!! Please take your time !! I'll be happy to read it and add it to my Literature folder on D.A !! If you want any idea's feel free to ask !!! I love bouncing idea's with authors!!
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
What a cute story. I love the France part and how Arthur is so desperate for her to be in love with him.
You're a very good writer.
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes: thanks.
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
It's a pleasure :)
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BulbasarsXD Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I like the part where arthur says kiss me back dammit
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
me too :)
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BulbasarsXD Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
DAMN HE'S HAWT
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
agreed!
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
This is Awesome!!!!!!!! I love this!! It's so cute so passionate I like Arthur's aggressive side to wanting the reader to love him! But I have to say it is a bit rushed! I wish this was a longer series cause its that good I'd love to see more!
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I've been getting a lot of that. I did too, but I have a really short attention span. Next time I won't skip important stuff like those three days :)
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Cool :) ....hey u know I can help u come up with ideas on the 3 days ...;) ;) ;)
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok :) I'm thinking of making another "chapter" but it will be about the three day gap I left.
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Then it's a Filler!
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay! I'll get started on it soon.
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Good luck!
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mijumaruuu Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
AWW!! this is so adorable~! i really enjoyed reading part 1 and this one too!!!
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^ thank you.
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mijumaruuu Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
no problem~ :)
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dracolupine Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it was cute. I have been having trouble with romance seens so this was kind of nice to read. Great job. Although it was a little awkward to read since I'm a guy.
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hetaliallover101 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
; ; so beautiful!!!
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Stray-Tail Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Awww >w< My heart has such warm fuzzies right now~ Lovely story~
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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1meh8 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
in all honesty..this would make a great book..
i should know because i write novels (never finish them though) XD
your good at writing romance stuff! :) great read!
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks. You think so?
I might just do that...
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1meh8 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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1redgirl1 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is good. However, I think it was a little rushed. I'd like to see /what/ Arthur did to get reader-chan to love him during the three days. It doesn't really work if you skip the three days and say that reader-chan loves him, there's nothing to re-enforce that love. It's like if you skipped to the very end of Beauty and the Beast so you have no idea why Bell loves the Beast.
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
sorry...It was a mixture of boredom and my short attention span.
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1redgirl1 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's alright. Like I said it was a cute story, it's just a little rushed
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XxRinOrangexX Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student Writer
IF THERE IS A EPILOGUE. READER SHOULD LEAVE ENGLAND XXDDD
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citrusemple Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
I love this so, so much.

([The only flaw I could ever point out is that, for someone of the Fey, Arthur is a pushover!
Tinkerbell is less f a pushover! And she's Disney! :icontinkerbellplz:
I'm only complaining because for a teenage girl, I know a lot about Fey, so I know the request "I want to go home" could have easily been turned around/would've had loopholes Arthur would have exploited, like any faerie would.
I'll ignore this though because you spelled faerie "fairy".]
*looks back* Wow... long rant...)
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
good point. I guess if I had put more time into it I would have made a loophole for Arthur, but I have a really short attention span.
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citrusemple Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Now that's a good excuse :XD:
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5British1Kitty5 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Will ethere be more!? 0.0 Because this was so awesome!
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
there might be...
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murrayb Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Student General Artist
more plezz
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MaiSodenoShirayuki Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Any chance of an epilogue? :iconpuppydogeyesplz:
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:iconbanshee-scream:
Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
...maybe...
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