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"I love you mommy," said your little boy with blonde hair.
Smiling you patted his head. "I love you too baby." It had been almost five year since his father had broken up with you.

~Flashback~

You were nearly bouncing in your seat. Today you had just found out that you were pregnant. It really didn't matter that you were eighteen, it didn't matter that you weren't married, what mattered was that you and the love of your life were going to have a baby together.
"Francis over here!" you waved down your boyfriend. He smiled and ran over to the café outdoor table. "Francis," you said taking his hand in yours, "I have some news."
"So do I."
You were a little surprised, "Oh, well you go first then."
"I've been accepted to a culinary school in France."
Silence passed between the two of you. "Oh…well that's great Francis."
He seemed to get a little more somber, "And I think that now is the time for us to go our separate ways. Long distance relationships never work out."
Silence.
"Yeah, right," you choked back a sob.
"Thank you __________, I'm so glad you understand," he gave you a quick peck on the cheek and ran off. You couldn't bring yourself to tell him, he was so happy and a child would just get in the way. Besides, if he really loved you he would have found a way to make it work.

~End of Flashback~

Now you had a son, he looked and acted exactly like his father, but without the French accent.
"Mommy, is daddy ever going to come back?"
You looked down at your son with sad eyes, "No, honey I don't think he is."
Your son pouted, "Uncle Arthur says daddy is a bastard."
Your eyes widened, "(Son's name), that is a bad word don't use it."
"But Uncle Arthur uses it…"
"Uncle Arthur is also going to get a mouthful of soap when we get home," you said turning back to the selection of milk.
"Mommy I want chocolate milk," (son's name) whined.
You smiled, "Ok, but just this once. After this we have to go get someone a birthday cake."
His eyes widened in glee, "Yay! Then my friends will come over. Peter and Ravis and Francisco (Seborga) and Anna (Wy)!"
"Alright what kind of cake does the birthday boy want?"
"Hmm," (son's name) went into deep thought. "Vanilla!"
You picked him up and put him in the cart, "Ok, Vanilla it is."
At the bakery you rang the little bell.
"Ohonhon~ and what can I do for-________!"
"F-Francis?" your eyes widened.
Francis looked pale from shock, "_-________."
"Mommy, who is he?"
Francis looked at you and then at your son, he looked a little sad. Then something seemed to click, "Umm…_________, how old is he?"
"He's turning four today," you said quietly.
"Mommy!" (son's name) tugged in your sleeve, "I wanna go home!"
"Is he…mine?"
You looked at him with sad eyes, "Yes…"
He walked around the counter and held you to his chest, "Forgive me."
"I-I do forgive you," you said and looked into his eyes. Giving you another one of his charming smiles he leaned forward to kiss you, "But," you put a finger to his lips, "I'm not sure if I can trust you."
Francis got down on his knee and took your hand in his, "Then I'll do whatever it takes to earn your trust again. Even if it takes me the rest of my life. Because _________, I never stopped loving you."
Tears came to your eyes as you said, "I never stopped loving you either…"
The tender moment was broken as someone screamed, "I WANNA GO HOME!"
I really have nothing to say on this one except COMMENT!!!
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:iconpurpleorchids869:
Purpleorchids869 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Student General Artist
CHASE FRANCIS BONNEFOY CAN YOU PLEASE BE PATIENT GEEZ!!!!!!

Also *walks up to England* HOW DARE YOU SPEAK LIKE THAT IN FRONT OF MY SON AND ABOUT MY MAN!!!!!! *slaps him*
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Sk8rchic2000 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My son is JUST like me!! A moment ruiner!!
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109144 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My, son. You're just like me, congrats, little man.
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DoruDesux1 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;w; *claps* Clap 
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soccergirl1210 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Why must my son ruin that moment? 
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iluv2camp99 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Sorry, but I would not forgive him that quickly...
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SilverWolfInsanity Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I wonder what other moments this child shall ruin? xD
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Zazzyleey Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I WANNAH GO HOME!!!!! xD oh Andre
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AmazingEmily9999 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Is there going to be a part two?
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:icontinyartist64:
Tinyartist64 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013
*names son after a fish* I'm sucha good mother *yeah!*
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Sk8rchic2000 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I named him Magicarp...
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Tinyartist64 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2014
yay!
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CanadaFan08 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Photographer
I named my son Mattie for Canada. Yay!!
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AmazingEmily9999 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
Woah! Me too!!! Air-five!!! :D
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CanadaFan08 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student Photographer
Awesome :highfive:
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annaOBeilschmidt Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
*covers sons mouth* now where we're we?
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xPhantomOfTheNighTx Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
No cake for you Ryder now sit yo ass down
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Invisible-Neko Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Clayton calm the fuq down or you don't get any cake.
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Artistgrl12 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student Artist
D:< CLAYTON! I SWEAR TO HR THAT IF YOU ARE GOING SOMEWHERE WITH MARY-JANE (i think. . .it's been a while) STAY AWAY FROM THE GORILLAS AND TARZAN! -^-
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TheDibfan Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
LOL that kid ruined the moment

(OMG I am never having a kid with a kid with france, I'm not ready for that kind of thing!)
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shadiebrooke Featured By Owner May 12, 2013   Digital Artist
Sweet Jesus Alec... Calm yo' titties mister! No extra icing for you.
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maevezz11 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
jeeze mark calm yo tits
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Invisible-Neko Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lolz made my night
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maevezz11 Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2013
I bet he walks in on you in moments of, passion, we all have the worst kid ever
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historygeek5 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I named the boy Jeffery! Jeffery calm down or no toy store gawd!
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Artistgrl12 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Student Artist
R.I.P historygeek5

COS Murdered along with husband, by multiple stab wounds to the chest.

historygeek5 was a loving mother and wife. May her soul rest in peace with her husband and her second son, Liu.

(Jeff the Killer reference!)
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percabethgirl Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconwhatyoudidthereplz:
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Artistgrl12 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Artist
:iconwoopplz:
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percabethgirl Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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historygeek5 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconohuplz: 
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Artistgrl12 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student Artist
:iconderpinaplz:
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commonchameleon Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OH GOSH THIS NEEDS MORE<3
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013
geez Daniel (that's what I named him ^^) Your father is trying to be nice again. But I forgive you it's your birthday you cutie you ^^
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DaughterOfErberus Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Way to ruin a moment kid.
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NezumiHaruka Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student General Artist
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This was so good~~!
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giantstorylover Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Sequel?"
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
sorry i dont think ill do a sequel for this
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giantstorylover Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
ok.
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Anonymous-Lizard Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Kids always ruin the moment.
Like me! 8D
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MissXCocoa Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2012
Fucking cock block kid...*ahem* I liked the story XD
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ImaNinjaWizard Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THAT. WAS AWESOME. :iconspazattackplz:
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pineapplenumber23 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have the cutest son ever:)
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trinn8 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
My baby broke the moment :,3
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Ask-Death-The-Kid Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(( Don't leave Francis... ;n; </3 .... FRANCIS. <3 ;w; OMG... I love this story!!! <3 ))
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ShinaNyan Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
:iconmegablushplz: D'awwwwww... DAMN YOU CHILD!!! *Thud*
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lackeygirlmoon Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Make a another part to this it was amazing
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That was cute~
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Adorable. I love how the little boy yelled at the end, even though it ruined the moment.
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diamondcatlenny Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
Aw I love this. And the little boy wanting to go home as soon as he saw his dad. Wow he spoiled the moment. But it was so cute.
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :)
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