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"Our ship has been taken!" Eliza shouted running away from the monstrous ship that had gotten near your small sailing ship.
"Hey ladies!" shouted a man with a Spanish accent. You grabbed a piece of splintered wood and prepared to defend yourself and your friend. "Who don't you put hat stick down and come along peacefully, si?"
"No," you said and swung your 'weapon' at the Spanish invader. "Leave us alone we have nothing you want!"
The Spanish pirate laughed, "But I think you do. I mean you're here aren't you, chica?"
You gave him a dry laugh, "Very funny, I know some Spanish too. Tu es un bastardo!"
"Toni we got the girl, are you ready to go?
Toni, who at the moment looked very distracted at what you said, "S-si." He ran over and tried to grab you, but you swung the stick right in front of him. Just missing him.
"Come at me!"
"You couldn't possibly hit me-hay!" You smacked him on the arm with your stick.
"Try me cerdo (pig)," you shouted getting ready to hit him again.
Toni shot at your weapon, breaking it in half.
You gulped.
"Ready to surrender, bonita senorita?"
"No!"
"____________!" Eliza shouted from the ship.
You looked up at your helpless friend than at Toni, "You jerk!"
"I'm Captain Antonio Carriedo, at your service madam," he said giving an extravagant bow. "Come aboard."
"Not like I have a choice," you grumbled. Crossing over the ship to you he took your hand and kissed it. "You are really cute, senorita ___________..."
You snapped at him while pulling away your hand, "Don't call me that."
"What, cute?" he asked pulling you close to him. "I like you; you are going to stay with me."
"Wh-what?"

~Time skip to almost a whole year~

"Hola, bonita," the Spanish captain purred into your ear.
"Hello captain," you said in an almost dull voice. The two of you were standing on the deck at night, him putting his arms around your waist like he always did when the two of you were alone. Leaning further against the rail in order to get away from his touch you sighed, "For once can't I be left alone?"
Captain Antonio let out a snarl and spun you around, "Why do you hate me?!"
You let out a gasp as he placed his lips furiously on yours.
Once he let go he whispered, "Te amo, __________. Te amo tanto que duele!" (I love you so much it hurts). He held your arms so you couldn't escape, "Why do you hate me?"
"I-I just…" you paused trying to collect your thoughts and feelings in order to put them into words. "I don't hate you…"
"Really? Then why do you-."
"It because I don't know how to act around you!" you shouted at him bursting into tears.
"Oh, querida," he cooed into your ear. "Te amo…"
You leaned towards his face and kissed him on the lips, "Te amo Toni…"
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Hope you all like it ^^
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:iconmexspaniardantonio:
MExSpaniardAntonio Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Loved this!
La la la la 
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hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
¿We haz secks nao, si? ;D
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ask-female-red-link Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
  :stick-poke: 
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Juliafox22 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Stick!! I choose you!!! Satoshi (I choose you) :stick-poke:  All be feared!!!


Awesome story by the way~ KAWAII!!!!
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kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Germany: MEIN STICKY FRIEND!!! Spain I'm going to kill you!
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:iconhetalialover9001:
hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
This. :iconletmehugyouplz:
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:iconkittykatrocks12:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHA!
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Kityluv Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Mwhahahah fear my stick. England (Evil) [V3] 
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ilovecats13 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What the h- *weirded out*
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:iconkalishralich:
KalishRalich Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Artist
*Faints From Fangirl Screaming And Nose Bleed* Can't Take It*Kisses Spain*
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:icontoastproducution:
ToastProducution Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A stick?  Since when did that became like minecraft I use a stick. I should have got the max bombs. 
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XlKittiezlX Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
Awww~ I feel like I just killed a turtle after he got all sad... By the way its "Tu eres un bastardo" sorry....^^;
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Goddess-ofMercy Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks Germany, You have taught a stick does come in handy. XD :iconherrstickplz:
Anyways, Wonderful my dear!
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Caty34576 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me:GO STICK -throws and misses by a long shot-Plan B YOLO-jumps off boat->w<
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aylastehr Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
Best plan ever! And your icon is adorable.
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Caty34576 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ikr thank you :3
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FearThePuffin Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh goodness!!! ;w;
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2013  Student General Artist
AAAWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!! That's so cute!!!!!
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AnnaBella125 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
*Faints from seeing the picture* :faint: *Resurrects to read the fanfic* *Faints after reading because of the fluffiness* :faint:
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HimekoAyuzawa Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol bro too funny XD
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AnnaBella125 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013
XD
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HimekoAyuzawa Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
X3
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwwwww so cute!!!!!!
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TheCompleteSaga Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There's nothing better than Pirate!Spain. Well, maybe except for his ass :happybounce:
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Goddess-ofMercy Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
True dat sista. XD
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davidtennantrocks Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
DAT ASS!

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Iloveyaoianime Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014
Yasuko Takasu (Fangirling) [V1]  ikr
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TheCompleteSaga Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I KNOW YOUR FEELS GURL!
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davidtennantrocks Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
what does 'querida' mean?
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it's a term of endearment,like "my dear" or something like that....wow I actually learned something in Spanish class...
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:) thanks for the info
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
Aww!
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DaughterOfErberus Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
I read this over and over and over, and the need to cry never lets up.
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Pichoochoo Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel like i just kicked a puppy everytime I read something with a sad or confused Spain. Otherwise, cute story!
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DaughterOfErberus Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013
Then it's the two of us!
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skating-wally Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
:iconawwwplz: Spain! you need a hug? :iconsupertighthugplz: *never lets go*
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kaay2 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I like it very much! Just about the 'Antonio Carriedo' part. Fernández is also his last name. The Spanish have two last names. The first one from the first last name of the father and the second from the first last name of the mother. But I'm not sure if you can say 'Antonio Fernández' instead. I haven't learned Spanish for so long. (Sorry if my English is unsound)
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here-and-faraway Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist
Excellent! I really like it!
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you ^^
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RAE8892 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
-fan girl scream- I love Pirate Toni!
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Shadowy-Nights Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012   General Artist
D'aawwww~ so cute :3
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badatartbutlovesit Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Too adorable for words <3

Thanks for putting the traslation up there =)
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Rainbow-babee Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh my goodness! I love it so much!! :happybounce: Thank you so much! C:
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Rainbow-babee Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh my goodness! I love it so much!! :happybounce: Thank you so much! C:
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome, I'm glad you liked it.
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KawaiiItaly Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
PirateSpaaaaain = Automatic favorite~
ALSO, this was AMAZIIING! :D
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Banshee-Scream Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you :D
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KawaiiItaly Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome X3
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Miku-chan-12 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Please write the next chapter! :iconpervplz:
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