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"Our ship has been taken!" Eliza shouted running away from the monstrous ship that had gotten near your small sailing ship.
"Hey ladies!" shouted a man with a Spanish accent. You grabbed a piece of splintered wood and prepared to defend yourself and your friend. "Who don't you put hat stick down and come along peacefully, si?"
"No," you said and swung your 'weapon' at the Spanish invader. "Leave us alone we have nothing you want!"
The Spanish pirate laughed, "But I think you do. I mean you're here aren't you, chica?"
You gave him a dry laugh, "Very funny, I know some Spanish too. Tu es un bastardo!"
"Toni we got the girl, are you ready to go?
Toni, who at the moment looked very distracted at what you said, "S-si." He ran over and tried to grab you, but you swung the stick right in front of him. Just missing him.
"Come at me!"
"You couldn't possibly hit me-hay!" You smacked him on the arm with your stick.
"Try me cerdo (pig)," you shouted getting ready to hit him again.
Toni shot at your weapon, breaking it in half.
You gulped.
"Ready to surrender, bonita senorita?"
"____________!" Eliza shouted from the ship.
You looked up at your helpless friend than at Toni, "You jerk!"
"I'm Captain Antonio Carriedo, at your service madam," he said giving an extravagant bow. "Come aboard."
"Not like I have a choice," you grumbled. Crossing over the ship to you he took your hand and kissed it. "You are really cute, senorita ___________..."
You snapped at him while pulling away your hand, "Don't call me that."
"What, cute?" he asked pulling you close to him. "I like you; you are going to stay with me."

~Time skip to almost a whole year~

"Hola, bonita," the Spanish captain purred into your ear.
"Hello captain," you said in an almost dull voice. The two of you were standing on the deck at night, him putting his arms around your waist like he always did when the two of you were alone. Leaning further against the rail in order to get away from his touch you sighed, "For once can't I be left alone?"
Captain Antonio let out a snarl and spun you around, "Why do you hate me?!"
You let out a gasp as he placed his lips furiously on yours.
Once he let go he whispered, "Te amo, __________. Te amo tanto que duele!" (I love you so much it hurts). He held your arms so you couldn't escape, "Why do you hate me?"
"I-I just…" you paused trying to collect your thoughts and feelings in order to put them into words. "I don't hate you…"
"Really? Then why do you-."
"It because I don't know how to act around you!" you shouted at him bursting into tears.
"Oh, querida," he cooed into your ear. "Te amo…"
You leaned towards his face and kissed him on the lips, "Te amo Toni…"
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MExSpaniardAntonio Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student General Artist
Loved this!
La la la la 
hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
¿We haz secks nao, si? ;D
ask-female-red-link Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
Juliafox22 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Stick!! I choose you!!! Satoshi (I choose you) :stick-poke:  All be feared!!!

Awesome story by the way~ KAWAII!!!!
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Germany: MEIN STICKY FRIEND!!! Spain I'm going to kill you!
hetalialover9001 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014
This. :iconletmehugyouplz:
kittykatrocks12 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Kityluv Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Mwhahahah fear my stick. England (Evil) [V3] 
ilovecats13 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What the h- *weirded out*
KalishRalich Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Artist
*Faints From Fangirl Screaming And Nose Bleed* Can't Take It*Kisses Spain*
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