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"Our ship has been taken!" Eliza shouted running away from the monstrous ship that had gotten near your small sailing ship.
"Hey ladies!" shouted a man with a Spanish accent. You grabbed a piece of splintered wood and prepared to defend yourself and your friend. "Who don't you put hat stick down and come along peacefully, si?"
"No," you said and swung your 'weapon' at the Spanish invader. "Leave us alone we have nothing you want!"
The Spanish pirate laughed, "But I think you do. I mean you're here aren't you, chica?"
You gave him a dry laugh, "Very funny, I know some Spanish too. Tu es un bastardo!"
"Toni we got the girl, are you ready to go?
Toni, who at the moment looked very distracted at what you said, "S-si." He ran over and tried to grab you, but you swung the stick right in front of him. Just missing him.
"Come at me!"
"You couldn't possibly hit me-hay!" You smacked him on the arm with your stick.
"Try me cerdo (pig)," you shouted getting ready to hit him again.
Toni shot at your weapon, breaking it in half.
You gulped.
"Ready to surrender, bonita senorita?"
"____________!" Eliza shouted from the ship.
You looked up at your helpless friend than at Toni, "You jerk!"
"I'm Captain Antonio Carriedo, at your service madam," he said giving an extravagant bow. "Come aboard."
"Not like I have a choice," you grumbled. Crossing over the ship to you he took your hand and kissed it. "You are really cute, senorita ___________..."
You snapped at him while pulling away your hand, "Don't call me that."
"What, cute?" he asked pulling you close to him. "I like you; you are going to stay with me."

~Time skip to almost a whole year~

"Hola, bonita," the Spanish captain purred into your ear.
"Hello captain," you said in an almost dull voice. The two of you were standing on the deck at night, him putting his arms around your waist like he always did when the two of you were alone. Leaning further against the rail in order to get away from his touch you sighed, "For once can't I be left alone?"
Captain Antonio let out a snarl and spun you around, "Why do you hate me?!"
You let out a gasp as he placed his lips furiously on yours.
Once he let go he whispered, "Te amo, __________. Te amo tanto que duele!" (I love you so much it hurts). He held your arms so you couldn't escape, "Why do you hate me?"
"I-I just…" you paused trying to collect your thoughts and feelings in order to put them into words. "I don't hate you…"
"Really? Then why do you-."
"It because I don't know how to act around you!" you shouted at him bursting into tears.
"Oh, querida," he cooed into your ear. "Te amo…"
You leaned towards his face and kissed him on the lips, "Te amo Toni…"
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Kityluv Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mwhahahah fear my stick. England (Evil) [V3] 
ilovecats13 Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What the h- *weirded out*
*Faints From Fangirl Screaming And Nose Bleed* Can't Take It*Kisses Spain*
ToastProducution Oct 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
A stick?  Since when did that became like minecraft I use a stick. I should have got the max bombs. 
Awww~ I feel like I just killed a turtle after he got all sad... By the way its "Tu eres un bastardo" sorry....^^;
Goddess-ofMercy Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks Germany, You have taught a stick does come in handy. XD :iconherrstickplz:
Anyways, Wonderful my dear!
Caty34576 Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me:GO STICK -throws and misses by a long shot-Plan B YOLO-jumps off boat->w<
Best plan ever! And your icon is adorable.
Caty34576 Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ikr thank you :3
FearThePuffin Aug 1, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh goodness!!! ;w;
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