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"I wouldn't bother confessing __________," Eliza told you.
You sighed.
"He just doesn't like you that way, I'm sorry."
"Whatever Eliza," you said preoccupied with the letter you were writing to that special someone.
"I asked," she piped up again.
You groaned as she continued to sneakily insult you.
"___________!" a voice from the front door called. "I'm back!"
Your face turned red, he was here. Now was your chance. But you were too late and Eliza answered the door and started to flirt with him. "Hey Gilly."
The albino gentleman walked into your kitchen were you sat. Quickly you hit your letter to him, "Hey Gil. What's up?"
"Nothing much, you?"
Eliza bounced into the room, "__________ is writing a love note."
Your face turned red, "Eliza!"
Gilbert turned slightly pale although you didn't notice.
"Yup, but I told her it wasn't worth it," she continued, "I mean it's not like the boy she likes would ever like her back, I mean-."
"Shut up Eliza!" Gilbert snapped. "__________ is pretty, and smart, and ten times more the lady that you'll ever be." He looked at you and turned red. "She's nice…she's funny…and well…she's really special…"
You blushed, "G-Gil…"
"And any guy would be lucky to have her." Quietly you slipped the piece of paper into his hand.
"G-Gilbert…I…umm have wanted to tell you for a long time…I really like you."
Gilbert took your letter, "Really?"
You smiled, "Yes."
Leaning down he swooped you up in a kiss.
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:iconartemiswest:
ArtemisWest Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
Geeze, all these people hating on Eliza, not sure whether or not i should like her anymore...

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xofandompridexo Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
I love this so much!!! Hungary u a bitch in this!
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AndyPandicorn Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Writer
LOL. BITCH DUN GOOFED.
LOOOOL. honestly, I've always disliked Hungary. So, YOLO. c;
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MeowDesu Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
When he told her I was like :iconhahaplz:

I totally hate Hungary in this fic XD
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
CRYING MY EYES OUT. I HATED HUNGARY FOR A SECOND. THAT WAS LIKE HATING PART OF ME ;3; BUT IT WAS BEAUTIFUL
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InsaneObsession Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
"The albino gentleman"-
STOP.
OKAY PAUSE.
RIGHT THERE.
Gentleman?
REALLY?
GENTLEMAN?!
*me and Arthur laugh*
Okay, *hits Eliza with blunt end of chainsaw*
*kisses Prussia*
*Arthur is pissed..*
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:iconhetalianwolf:
HetalianWolf Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Excellent!
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:iconannabella125:
AnnaBella125 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
Eliza, sometimes I will have to use your frying pan technique on you. :threaten:
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:iconinsaneobsession:
InsaneObsession Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013
I have my chainsaw Paul.
Paul LAUGHS at her frying pan. :iconrussiarapefacepls:
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:iconannabella125:
AnnaBella125 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2013
*sees Russia's purple aura* I-I'll just go now... :sprint:
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:icontreekoi:
Treekoi Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Student General Artist
That bitch got told! :iconmhmmplz:
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:iconcorgiinthesea:
CorgiIntheSea Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013
*hood mode activate *boop**


NIGGA GOT TOLD
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:iconn3kokrazy:
N3koKrazy Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Writer
I laughed so hard at this.. This made my day.
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:iconlenkagaminegirl1:
lenkagaminegirl1 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
IN YOUR FACE ELIZA!!!!!!!
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:icondillenbeilschmidt:
DillenBeilschmidt Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
DAMN!!!!!BITCH GOT TOLD
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animelover-8 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww Gil I wuv u
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:iconporcelain-child:
Porcelain-child Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013
:icondamnplz:
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwww!!!! I think im in love (with Prussia)
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:iconprussiakeseseses:
Prussiakeseseses Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
Luv it oh and would it be possible 4 u 2 make a romano x Spain cos I just found out about spamano!
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:iconmiss-sherlocked:
Miss-Sherlocked Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Aw, cute. :3 (This Eliza person sound like a royal pain!)
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VocaloidDubbr Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
I think Eliza is Hungary's human name, and I like to think of her setting up the reader and Gill through provoction. :D
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:iconmiss-sherlocked:
Miss-Sherlocked Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Ahhhhh, I see! ;P Still rude...
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:iconkatnjax:
katnjax Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
I'm not really a fan of this piece, Hungary would never be like that. Not even if another girl liked Austria. Hungary is better than that. :/
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:iconkaia99:
kaia99 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
I gravestones with the and name and were fighting over prussia so this 'll tottaly shut her up
Merp merp
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:iconvalentine345:
Valentine345 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
*sniffs*
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:iconrosie992010:
rosie992010 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
Ha! I win Hungary!
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:iconpunk-rocker-lover:
punk-rocker-lover Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Prussia: 1 - Hungary: 0
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:iconmargaretvevo:
margaretvevo Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haHA HUNGARY! I WIN AGAIN!
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:iconvocaloidanimefan:
vocaloidanimefan Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yay go Prussia!
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:iconkanta-chan1:
Kanta-chan1 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. Prussia just told Hungary off!!!!! Sweet!
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:iconkashthekat:
KashTheKat Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfrenchsquealplz:
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YasminKirkland1031 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
I love that France icon!!!
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:iconpussia:
Pussia Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
they should have one like that for poland.....
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:iconkashthekat:
KashTheKat Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So do I :iconsquealplz:
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qweruiopqweruiop Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
yayy!!! ha hungary take that :P
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:iconimaninjawizard:
ImaNinjaWizard Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dude I love you for this!!!! :iconsqueeeeplz: :iconsqueeeeplz::hug::glomp::iconslowhugplz:

YAY GILBERT LOVES ME AND HUNGARY GOT OWNED! :iconblushingplz:
Thanks so much, if you ever need help or anything, I'll be happy to help you! :D
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Lassie-C-123 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eliza, you bitch. You planned this didn't you?
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Rainbow-babee Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Gosh! Why is Eliza bieng a bitch... jeez lol cute story!!
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utachan13 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
So cute!!
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monkchoo24 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
omg haha lol


You got hugged!

Spread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!)

RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you!
2- You -MUST- hug 6 other people, at least!
3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their page!
4- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet)
5- You should most definitely get started hugging right away!

Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1.
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved!

1-3 you're bad friend
4-6 you're an ok friend
7-9 you're a good friend
10-& Up you're a great friend

I love happy endings~
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333hf333 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I think you need to work on your characterisation and grammar.
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:icongagu-kun:
Gagu-kun Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Hungary is a bitch .. xd
like it xd
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:iconprussiakeseseses:
Prussiakeseseses Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013
How dare you, don't be a wanker!
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SomeUnicornWazHere Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This fanfic made me go (●´□`)♡ and (*°∀°)=3.
eOe This was my first of your fanfics and most likely not the last.
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The-Horse-Whisperer Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsexyprussiaplz: YO BITCH, YOU LOSER :iconsexyassplz:
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DarknessOnMyEyes Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't get me wrong, Hungary is my favorite female character, but...

I almost made a victory dance when she was rejected :meow:

Just... AWESOME xD
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surika1193 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
BITCH GOT CUT DOWN! :iconprussiaumadplz:
I love Hungary but .....
OMFG I WAS FREAKING CHEERING WHEN PRUSSIA TOLD HER OFF!
Job well done prussia...job well done. :iconclapplz:
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Shuru10 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
KYYYAAAAAAA!!~ >W< :D :iconexcitedblushplz:
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Nibblez22 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it...
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