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“Give it up __________,” Eliza said taking a slurp from her drink, “he’s with that girl (least favorite name)…”
You squeezed your cup so hard it started to crinkle. The ‘happy couple’ was sitting in the corner booth having milkshakes. Running your tongue over you’re your lip rings your growled. Arthur Kirkland was a well-known punk rocker.
So why on earth was he dating that priss (least favorite name)?
“___________, we’re up,” Lili said. The five of you girls were in a band called ‘Heart Breakers’. You, Eliza, Lili, Kat, and Nat.
Light bulb.
“Hey, Lili let’s try the song?”
“Thee song?”
You nodded.
She smiled and nodded, “You’re on.”
Once all five of you were on stage; Eliza on bass, Lili on keys, Kat on guitar, and Nat on drums. You stepped up to the mic.
“Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don’t like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend,”
You ran up to Arthur and his date still holding onto the microphone and jumped on his table.
“Hey! Hey! You! You!
I know that you like me
No way! No way!
I know it's not a secret
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I want to be your girlfriend,”
You smirked at (least favorite name) horrified face. You grabbed the front of Arthur’s shirt and pulled his face close to yours.
“You’re so fine
I want you mine
You’re so delicious
I think about you all the time
You’re so addictive
Don’t you know what I could do to make you feel alright (alright, alright, alright)?”
He did nothing, but smile at you. His charming green eyes growing darker as the song went on.
“Don’t pretend I think you know I’m damn precious
And Hell Yeah
I’m the motherf***ing princess
I can tell you like me too and you know I’m right,”
You let go his shirt and pushed him back against t the booth. Turning to his girlfriend you walked off the table and patted her face at the next line.
“She’s like so whatever
You could do so much better
I think we should get together now
And that’s what everyone’s talking about!”
(Least favorite name) slapped your hand away, but missed and you ran up back to the stage.
“Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don’t like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I know that you like me
No way! No way!
You know it’s not a secret
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I want to be your girlfriend,”
Arthur had made his way to the front of the stage. You knelt down to your knees and sang right to his face.
“I can see the way, I see the way you look at me
And even when you look away I know you think of me
I know you talk about me all the time again and again (again, again, again)
So come over here, tell me what I want to hear.”
You glared at (least favorite name).
“Better yet make your girlfriend disappear
I don’t want to hear you say her name ever again (and again, and again, and again!)”
Poking his chest you smiled and sang,
“Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don’t like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I know that you like me
No way! No way!
You know it’s not a secret
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I want to be your girlfriend!”
You stood up and sang with Eliza,
“In a second you’ll be wrapped around my finger
'cause I can, 'cause I can do it better
There’s no other
So when's it gonna sink in?
She’s so stupid
What the hell were you thinking?!

In a second you’ll be wrapped around my finger
'cause I can, 'cause I can do it better
There’s no other
So when's it gonna sink in?
She’s so stupid
What the hell were you thinking?!”
(Least favorite name) growled and jumped on stage chasing you around while you sang.
“Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don’t like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend
No way! No way!
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I know that you like me
No way! No way!
You know it’s not a secret
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I want to be your girlfriend
No way! No way!

Hey! Hey! You! You!
I don’t like your girlfriend!
No way! No way!
I think you need a new one
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I could be your girlfriend
No way! No way!
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I know that you like me
No way! No way!
You know it’s not a secret
Hey! Hey! You! You!
I want to be your girlfriend
No way! No way!

Hey! Hey!”
You jumped into Arthur’s arms, while (least favorite name) got tangled in some cords and fell off the stage.
“That was quite a show, love,” Arthur said setting you down.
“Nah,” you shrugged. “It was nothing.”
The handsome Brit put his arm around your shoulder, “Want to go get some dinner?”
You smirked, “Yeah.”
A small voice from the floor whined, “Artie-poo.”
“Looks like you just got dumped,” Eliza said in a fake sad voice. You gave Eliza a high-five.
Requested by :iconalicethequietrose:

The picture is not mine. I found it on Google.

The song isn't mine either, it belongs to the talented Avril Lavigne. Here is the [link] to the music video if you want to check it out.
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lnfluenze Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amagaaad. Using Avril Lavigne songs in your stories... I fucking love you. *w*
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EnterHetaliaNameHere Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"Artie-Poo"? XD THAT'S TOTALLY A NICKNAME A DITZY, AIR-HEADED WHORE LIKE HER WOULD GIVE TO A BABE LIKE ARTHUR!
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MortalInstruments14 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Loved it !!!!!!!
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Marshallismyking Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
so cuTe! I love j
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Demonkisses14 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
“Looks like you just got dumped,” Eliza said in a fake sad voice. You gave Eliza a high-five.
Me: hey Artie I know something better then dinner
Arther : * blush*
Me: come on~ * drags arther away*
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MattSmithDoctor Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome!
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aquarin02 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Writer
Yus go avril!
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pandascop Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
that was kindda awsome~ ^ ^
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BinkuMuja Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
I've seen some of the other work you have posted and I'm sorry, but it has to be said; this submission blows in comparison to what you have uploaded. Using the entire lyrics of a song with bare minimal input from who is 'singing' it, shows a lack of interest in the story. You gave little to no details about anyone or anything and little to no interaction between characters.

You could've explained why she wanted Arther. You could've explained that his current girlfriend was a complete bitch or cheating on him via the bitch posse the character is leading. Instead you had the insert character behave like a self entitled boyfriend stealing git with no respect for other peoples relationships.

:iconsomadrightnowplz:
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madame-North Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
They're punk. Who cares?
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