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"Umm Feli?" you asked into the phone.
"No Feliciano isn't here," Lovino snarled, "who is this?"
You jumped, "Oh this is ____________."
"What do you want with my idiota fratello?"
Somehow Lovino always seemed to make you feel quite small, like a little rabbit. You didn't know why he seemed to pick on and call you names more. "Umm, well we have our cooking lesson today. I just wanted to know if he was on his way."
"What cooking lesson?" he shouted into the phone.
You let out a squeak, "H-He's been teaching me how to cook." Then the phone went dead, "L-Lovino? Are you there?" No answer. After that you put the phone back. "I guess Feli is on his way."
The doorbell rang and you answered it to find the bubbly Italian, "You ready _________~?"
You nodded smiling, "I was getting worried. What are we making today?"
"But Feli we made pasta last time, could we try something else." You asked, "Maybe a dessert?"
Feliciano looked very thoughtful for a moment, "Hmm, biscotti?"
You smiled, "That sounds good."
Feliciano blushed at your smile. He really, really liked you. You were smart, beautiful, and always nice to him. "Si, let's get started."

~Time Skip~

"There," you smiled as you slid the Italian cookie into the oven. "Thanks Feli." You gave him a small peck on the nose. You happy little Italian blushed hard.
"Y-You're welcome." Feliciano turned to you, "_-________."
You replied quietly, "Yes?"
"_________, I-."
Suddenly the door swung open, "What's going on here!"
You jumped and turned around to see a red faced angry Lovino, "L-Lovi? What are you doing here?"
"D-Don't call me Lovi dammit!" he shouted at you. He then turned redder, "__________."
"Lovino, what's wrong?"
"Si fratello, why are you here?" Feliciano asked his brother.
"B-Because I don't want to lose to you any more Feli!"
You looked between Lovino and Feliciano, "Lose what?"
Feli opened his eyes and stared at his brother with large innocent eyes. Lovino glared at Feliciano. A long time of silence passed between the three of you before you heard the timer go off on the oven. "I-I'll be right back." With that you chickened out and ran back to the kitchen.
"Back off Feli," Lovino said, "_________ is mine."
Feli cocked his head, "__________ doesn't belong to anyone Lovi~."
"Stop calling me Lovi! And I know that, but you have everything. You can't take her too!"
"But I like her too," said Feli, "But I think that ____________ can make her own decision."
Lovino growled, "Fine. Whoever can get __________ to love them the most wins?"
Then you came back to them, "Feli, Lovi…no. Want to try some?" You held out your biscotti to the two brothers.
The two brothers nodded. You felt like you had walked right in the middle of something, and whatever it was it was going to change your life for a long time.
I will not be doing a sequel to this. Sorry I have other things I want to do. For example chapter three of this story I'm writing on...

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:iconpokemonlovinggirl: it wrong that I can't choose and I just want them both...? *blush*

Oooh, I'll be reading the next two parts! o3o


Well done on the writing!!! ^u^

KathyBrine Nov 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sorry Lovi, I like Feli more :D
13th-Program Oct 24, 2013  Student General Artist
ahahahahaha! XD it's so cute!!! X3
hedgehogs11 Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
shit just got real. i have an idea! why dont you two play russian roulette!
MsGeekNerd Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Boys boys, there's plenty of me to go around. I'm flexible
Vegveghowrse Sep 5, 2013  Student Filmographer
omg your comment just made my day/night XD 
MsGeekNerd Sep 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!! But it's true. They can SHARE me
Hetaliacanadia Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Aww, why can't the Italies just share me~? They say Italians make the best lovers so why not have 2?
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